Dear Odessa Berry,

I read your article “SAFER club creates shirts, sends needed messages on harassment”, and I liked it a lot! I appreciated how much effort you put into making the reader really care about the club and the volleyball players. I can tell by reading that you really care about the issue, which I believe is really important in a piece like this. I also think the quotes you got were very good. It was nice hearing other student’s opinions, and choosing to interview Madison Schaefer and Anika Wright was a good idea given their strong connections to the situation.

Although, I do wish you could have included more information on the SAFER club. I think the piece could benefit from another interview with a member of the club, or more information about what they plan to do in the future. 

I appreciate all the effort and energy that has gone into the resurgence of the newspaper, and I look forward to future editions. Keeping our community informed is essential to open and positive communication. 

Sincerely,

Minif Gorden