I really enjoyed reading your article on the swim team, and I really like what you wrote about! I think it’s great that you added details about what the swim team does and some of the swimmers’ achievements. As a new member of the team, I’ve been impressed by how inclusive the community is and all the effort they put into team bonding. I also really enjoyed how you highlighted the experiences and perspectives of the seniors. Hopefully, your article will inspire more students to join!
Sincerely,
Ariah Golden, student at McDaniel High School